Wednesday, December 13, 2017

Blur Comments

Rating: 4.5

She left him a tortured soul.
In his heart there was a hole.
He hid out like a mole.
Waiting for his life to unfold.
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Lamar Cole
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Chris Embrick 16 December 2017

Determination brings clear vision. Looking back some things were better lost. I've had blurred vision several times but I'ts the will to enjoy life that keeps me going. Enjoyed. Thanks.

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Rini Shibu 13 December 2017

A tortured soul waiting to unfold.. Well penned

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