Wednesday, January 6, 2016

Blur Comments

Rating: 4.5

Your remembrance is just a blur now
Faded by the wear and tear of life
A lonely picture in unconscious mind
Rotting in the dark cell behind
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Nosheen Irfan
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A wonderfully worded work my friend!

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M Asim Nehal 06 January 2016

It is very difficult to cope up with lost love yet one has to move on in life with what is destined.....Nice poem, I enjoyed it...10++

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Nosheen Irfan 06 January 2016

Thank you Asim. Lovely reading your comments.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 January 2016

Love and pain! With the muse of the troubles of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 January 2016

Thank you Edward. You are always nice and encouraging.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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