Monday, October 13, 2014

Blunder March! Comments

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It's the yard of love and peace
All praise the mystic queen eternal
Her dormant smile was rhythmic
Adore the mighty with passion
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SALINI NAIR
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Akhtar Jawad 04 November 2014

A poem with a great message......................10

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Ramesh Rai 19 October 2014

Amongst all creatures human being is most selfish. Still marching towards the same direction. A great message conveyed.

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 October 2014

Thought provoking poem Salini. For meeting his selfish needs, they cut the branch of same tree where they are sitting. Sure they are going to fall destroying not only self but the others lives too. Loved the way you presented it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 October 2014

By nature people are selfish and on whose lap they are taking shelter scarcely care to regard her when their interests suffer a bit.......a very inspiring poem with a great message

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