Thursday, September 22, 2011

Bluesman Comments

Rating: 4.8

He's just
Any old man
In any old bar
With a guitar
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Dave Alan Walker
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Julia Luber 15 June 2019

Great poem. I like poems about the blues. It is such an artistic and heart felt music so bringing poetry to that stage only makes sense.

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Dominic Windram 02 November 2018

Great poem..conjures up a vivid image of bluesman Jack

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Akhtar Jawad 07 April 2018

He took him to places he'd never been He took him back With the sweet sound of home He took him To where he had grown A lovely poem.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 05 September 2017

I love a good blues. Imaginative.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 11 July 2015

loved this piece... because I love the blues myself.

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Bri Edwards 28 March 2015

not my favorite on PH, but obviously from the glance at some other comments, it was appreciated. i will gladly put it into my April (or March) 'Showcase', but i await your answer to the message i'm about to send to you. thanks for sharing. bri :) my favorite stanza: He's just Any old man In any old bar With a guitar

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Daniel Brick 20 March 2015

WOW! This is superb! What drama, what truth, the art of poetry serving the art of the blues, and both are enhanced by this union. I remember during his performance many years ago, Taj Mahal telling us the Blues can't be defined, only experienced, but the one thing the Blues always is - is sweet. I've never forgotten that. People applauded after he said it, and then he said, Now I'm going to prove it to you. Your poem is another proof of that truth, and it needs no further comment. The experience of reading it is totally fulfilling.

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Kewayne Wadley 10 March 2015

Nicce! ! A beautiful story that tells a story within a story

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Ramesh Rai 23 September 2014

Soulful write.Loved your emotional write as earlier.

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Chizryan Ogunkah 28 July 2013

good capture of imagery. very powerful and evocative.

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Andrew Bell 09 May 2012

That's a great poem mate. I had a perfect scene playing in my head. Can you read mine if you get the time and let me know what you think?

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Sarah Walker 09 May 2012

My favourite don't know what else to say read em all and this is my favourite

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Jay Yanni 11 March 2012

loved reading this poem.

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Karen Deeks 11 March 2012

Beautiful spit and sawdust write of truth reality and those glorious blues.. I'm not a specific follower of any music style I appreciate all types but blues and vino seem the perfect company to enduce tears of respect and nostalgia..Thank you for sharing Karen :)

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Scotty Dogg 12 December 2011

Didn't The Who do a live album from Leeds? Love The Who. Pete's a great guitarist. And song writer. One of the best ever. 'S'

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Danae Kavouridi 09 December 2011

lovely............................

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 25 November 2011

well penned, very touching...thanks for sharing Dave......10+++++++++++

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(De Va) 07 November 2011

Soul touching....I could hear the guitar as he strummed his tune...thx...blessings

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Nick Krakana 28 October 2011

THis is a great write

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Jacqui Broad 08 October 2011

Thanks for spending time to write this. The weather-beaten people always have a story to tell, but gets condemned too easily. Salute...

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