Friday, January 29, 2021

Blues In The Background Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life was so exciting and busy, but still I was dissatisfied,
For my job was going nowhere, like blooms with noplace to hide.

I had for long had a dream, of becoming a world famous singer,
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 January 2021

A beautiful poem well crafted with nice rhyme and imagery.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 January 2021

To follow our dream, we can conquer life

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Kim Barney 30 January 2021

Great poem, Evelyn. Five stars!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 January 2021

I would love to hear you sing and be someone like Diana Ross Bravo!

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Kostas Lagos 30 January 2021

Well written poem. Very interesting

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David Wood 30 January 2021

I dreamed a dream if time gone by, when life was young and full, it made me cry! A brilliant poem! !

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Lyn Paul 30 January 2021

A Wonderful poem Evelyn.

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Varsha M 29 January 2021

I always want for your these long poems. They always have a message and a lesson. This time is concert. And the topic is envy. Actually this happens in every sphere of life. In every child's life as they grow in family among siblings...so we need to understand this and live wise.

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