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appears slightly incomplete say more o poet critique I am poetry read my poem MOMS SMILES U seem to have missed it

Dead sunlight is amazingly reflected on sea shore. You have perfectly captured the imagery. This is an amazing poem on memory....10

salty, soggy, warmth smelling from your body in this pair eyes blue sea, blue sky, green forest, an excited face around nothing is here on the beach we are each to other...........