You can know longer say that your country is free
When your choice is clothes hangers or a trip down the stairs
You can know longer pretend there's not a price to the dream
When your job is a treadmill that's going no where
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A great political write full of satire with a tinge of humor. The flaws of democracy is brilliantly depicted. Well expressed.
Enjoyed reading this satire, but at the end of line four, I think you meant 'nowhere' instead of 'know here'. Probably your self-correct speller did that to you.
A scorching satire on the American/Canadian dream. And the hypocrisy of democracy. A brilliant write, Kevin. Thoroughly enjoyed your very thought provoking poem!
A great poem that carries a message for those who pretend to be happy on the loaf thrown to them by the rulers