BLUES
The startled note rose
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'Nostalgia wipes out tricks of vision, And the wind, the chill breeze Doesn’t scare any more The maple-tree and its leaves…' Very nice composition.
Your B flat blues is unit. it is like the Blues is no longer blue&green - but in B and ronde - magic like the green Tara
rose still beams blue by the colors true fear seem to dissolves evein by the despair........lovely poem when heaves by imagery.............10/10, thanks for sharing
whoa, awesome...simply amazing poem...i love the blues! ! You have captured them so well here, but I sense more of a B minor, than a B flat, in this poem!
A brilliantly written first stanza, followed be an immagery filler second, A reading pleasure to be enjoyed by all,
'Isn’t afraid of turning into rain… Of going with the wind in spring? ' stunning.............thanks for sharing
Poetry at its purest, the poem is a song for all hearts 10 Chris x
The sounds of fury vanished...........till the vapors drying up, and the blues live on. Marvelous works of art from you my dear Tsira.