Sunday, April 13, 2008

Blues Comments

Rating: 5.0

BLUES


The startled note rose
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 November 2008

The sounds of fury vanished...........till the vapors drying up, and the blues live on. Marvelous works of art from you my dear Tsira.

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Gary Fellows 10 November 2008

Nice musical thoughts on the blues, well done! Gary

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 October 2008

'Nostalgia wipes out tricks of vision, And the wind, the chill breeze Doesn’t scare any more The maple-tree and its leaves…' Very nice composition.

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Raveendran . 24 April 2008

The wind playing music, no frozen despair

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Roland Bastien 17 April 2008

Your B flat blues is unit. it is like the Blues is no longer blue&green - but in B and ronde - magic like the green Tara

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 April 2008

rose still beams blue by the colors true fear seem to dissolves evein by the despair........lovely poem when heaves by imagery.............10/10, thanks for sharing

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David Desantis 16 April 2008

whoa, awesome...simply amazing poem...i love the blues! ! You have captured them so well here, but I sense more of a B minor, than a B flat, in this poem!

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Howard Johnson 15 April 2008

A brilliantly written first stanza, followed be an immagery filler second, A reading pleasure to be enjoyed by all,

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 14 April 2008

'Isn’t afraid of turning into rain… Of going with the wind in spring? ' stunning.............thanks for sharing

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Broken Peaces 13 April 2008

Poetry at its purest, the poem is a song for all hearts 10 Chris x

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