Saturday, July 6, 2013

Blues Comments

Rating: 5.0

I scrubbed my heart with
Love's cleansing cream
Spilled in air the gleam
took the hue of blues
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Savita Tyagi
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Abhilasha Bhatt 24 December 2016

You know.....this one is a tremendous creation an example of how much in deep and broad a poet can think......loved it a lot :)

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Hazel Durham 20 December 2016

Powerful imagery of cleansing the heart to make room for true love! Beautiful write!

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Savita Tyagi 20 December 2016

Thank you Hazel. So good to hear from you. Wish you a Merry Christmas and a happy New year.

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Heather Wilkins 03 August 2013

a good write i like the thought of cleansing the heart

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Neela Nath Das 10 July 2013

Terrific expression.Loved very much.

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