Saturday, September 8, 2012

Blueness Comments

Rating: 5.0

His blueness took my breath away
instilled an upsurge of well-being.
neighbours paused, they had to watch
The day a budgie came sightseeing.
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Ann Beard
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Danny Draper 19 September 2012

A fine descriptive and compassionate write with some lovely images. Thank you.

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Ann Beard 10 September 2012

Thank you Mark for your encouraging comment.

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Mark Walters 08 September 2012

That's wonderful. You have a real way of describing the bird, I really wasn't sure just what you meant for a moment.

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Ann Beard

Ann Beard

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