Monday, September 8, 2014

Blueberry Picking Comments

Rating: 4.5

August is a blue haze of
ripened fields,
hurried over by swarming pickers
this year of plenty. The Rakers eye
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Richard Provencher
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 February 2015

Wow great fruit picking imagery and scenes poem with fine freeverse depictions in words. Interesting way u captured it all. So nice to read u again.

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July 3/17Thank you for kind words. To share ones' thoughts and feelings is such an adventure.

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Chinedu Dike 08 September 2014

A highly imaginative poem about the hard work and the joy during harvest of Blueberry farmers. A lovely piece. Thanks for sharing.

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July 3/17 Merci bien. I appreciate encouraging words. Writing has sustained me through my stroke in 1999 and my recuperation continues. Blueberries are so good for you. PS I have returned to this site with new poems.

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