I've just read this beautiful poem of yours, it's so nice! Loved the description of the blueberry plucking, and later in the poem, of the yearning for loved and desired one.
'Oh! Symmetrical sweetness! ' - an excellent expression!
'I held my breath,
To breathe you in' - another expression that I loved very much.
10/10 for this beautiful poem.
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I've just read this beautiful poem of yours, it's so nice! Loved the description of the blueberry plucking, and later in the poem, of the yearning for loved and desired one. 'Oh! Symmetrical sweetness! ' - an excellent expression! 'I held my breath, To breathe you in' - another expression that I loved very much. 10/10 for this beautiful poem.