Friday, October 26, 2012

Blueberry Field (At The End Of The Day) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Between the rows of blue-
Oh! Symmetrical sweetness!
Tasting a tangy, juicy flesh,
Like purple honey,
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Crystal Rosser
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Khairul Ahsan 03 May 2016

I've just read this beautiful poem of yours, it's so nice! Loved the description of the blueberry plucking, and later in the poem, of the yearning for loved and desired one. 'Oh! Symmetrical sweetness! ' - an excellent expression! 'I held my breath, To breathe you in' - another expression that I loved very much. 10/10 for this beautiful poem.

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