Thursday, July 18, 2013

Bluebells Comments

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Oh they are so beautiful
Dancing beneath the trees
How they captivate my heart
Stood swaying in the breeze
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Valerie Dohren
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Nicole 27 October 2019

hello Valerie, i just wanted to say that i adore this poem and i used the line “tiny bells of sapphire blue tinkling in the sun” for one of my inktober drawings. Thank you for this, I wish you to be in good health always.

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Heather Wilkins 28 August 2013

bluebells are so beautiful an excellent write about them

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Kevin Patrick 01 August 2013

A painter of words for a spectacular impression, so beautiful and delicate a great work as always

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Patricia Grantham 24 July 2013

I have not seen this kind of flower in quite awhile. You have so vividly described it's beauty that I could have just imagined how lovely they were as they danced beneath the trees. Loved it.

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Walterrean Salley 23 July 2013

Just love this Val. How lovely; I can see it with my mind’s eye. Great job. PS: Some months ago, I wrote one like this on bluebells. Hope to share it with my next postings.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 22 July 2013

In my memory too. I remember the bluebell wood so well. Thanks for the thoughts..

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Ken E Hall 21 July 2013

Dancing beneath the trees, a beautiful sight memories I have not seen for forty years But in my mem’ry they Have stayed thanks for this...regards

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Unwritten Soul 21 July 2013

Bluebells ringing it color and spread the melody from it resonating move...i love bluebell but kind of sad thing, its hard to get here where i stay now_Soul

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Valsa George 21 July 2013

Like Wordsworth's Golden Daffodiles! Bluebells dancing beneath the tree is a lovely sight! !

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Sandra Feldman 20 July 2013

Tiny bells of sapphire blue how delightfully enchanting. Great poem in it's sincere simplicity., like a breath of fresh air. Thank you

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Dee Corpolongo 20 July 2013

oh! I so love this poem, Val. I love nature and the flowers, and esp. bluebells....so beautiful and delightful! Thank you!

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R.j. Wynn 20 July 2013

Short sweet melody the way that it is.

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Lucifera Santez 20 July 2013

a marvel in itself.........................

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Heather Wilkins 19 July 2013

a good write about bluebells. nice imagery.

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Kevin Halls 19 July 2013

Who doesn't love Bluebells? But they get hidden away in Woods and Forests. A nice poem Val.

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Danny Draper 19 July 2013

A fine bluebell poem. They are a beautiful carpet of colour in forests.

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David Wood 19 July 2013

I love bluebells too, they are so lovely to look at.

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Hazel Durham 18 July 2013

Bluebells are one of my favourite flowers that stand out proud and delicate amongst the trees! Beautiful write!

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Dave Walker 18 July 2013

A beautiful poem, the woods down the road from me is full of bluebells.

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