Thursday, May 9, 2013

Bluebells Comments

Rating: 4.9

Bluebells carpet the woodland floor
Packed so tightly that insects tip-toe
Softly and quietly between them.
Their beauty unlocks a woodland door
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COMMENTS

Congratulations, David. This great poem is ranked @ #73 in the Best Poems of Members. Surely, it deserves better ranking, which it will achieve, I am sure. All the best

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Jayne Louise Davies 09 June 2023

So beautiful David x Thanks for sharing : ) x

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Craig Moses Uche 26 May 2023

I love your style of poetry, similar to mine in that u've magnified the iambic pentameter. Very lovely rhyme scheme

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Michael Hopkins 25 December 2022

A well penned poem David

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 December 2022

This is becoming my favorite from you Bravo!

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Jayne Louise Davies 13 December 2022

Beautiful poem David! A pleasure to read x

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Jalal Sunstrum 12 December 2022

Bravo! Very deep... Makes want to read all of your poems.

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Rob Lamberton 01 December 2022

Yes loud and clear with every season and each passing year—Thank You!

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Keith Elliott 02 November 2022

A romantic meander over a fleeting carpet of colour

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Smoky Hoss 19 May 2022

Such a beautiful poem! The displayed wonder and glory of nature, superb.

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Marvellous poem. But, David, where are your new poems?

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 29 March 2022

Beauty of Nature so wonderfully painted through this poem, dear David. Loved your poem....10

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 March 2022

I just made a revisit to this marvellous poem. Beautiful poem to have come back to. Thank you David

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Namita Rani Panda 14 February 2022

A living, breathing and colourful creation. Brilliant!

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Michael Cochrane 13 February 2022

Excellent poem David

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 February 2022

This is a beautiful poem dear David... Thanks for sharing

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Pat Symcox 13 February 2022

POOOO....Dang...Eropean Fuc..kng....

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Pat Symcox 13 February 2022

Vagfffgggg......sexx....pro.....!

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Pat Symcox 13 February 2022

Bastard fellow......A knife will go through your nose....

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David Wood 25 March 2022

Pat Symcox is none other that Dillip K Swain.

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Pat Symcox 13 February 2022

FRRRR...Fuck you Mother Fucker

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David Wood 13 February 2022

Pat Symcox, you need to see a doctor or psychiatrist, or both. Have a nice day.

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