Sunday, January 20, 2008

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Rating: 5.0

SHE comes back
where always she does
among a lot of ones, an only one
un-beloved and hanging pendant
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Stefania Paluzzi
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Afzal Shauq 22 September 2009

SHE comes back where always she does among a lot of ones, an only one un-beloved and hanging pendant from the vaults below the oaks every time well written.. agian the idea is good and the storical type in dialogue way written is increasing its beauty..well done..professionally done

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Sweet, short, poem, that nicely shows a small, delicate scene.

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