Monday, May 4, 2009

Bluebell Experience Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mystical mixture in woods today
Of dappling sunlight and soft breeze
Heady with bell-scent which, when heightened
By sky-blue shades, eyeing me shyly
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Fay Slimm
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James Timothy Jarrett 17 May 2009

A beautiful wandering rhythm sways through this piece when read. Very nice

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Tom Balch 16 May 2009

Now this is how a walk should be Fay, a lovely piece with wonderful images, regards Tom

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 May 2009

very imaginative and humble! very amazing! like Mozart Piano Sonata on words!

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I can see by your biography that you are so much part of nature and your appreciation is shown so wonderfully in this poem as well as the others I have read. To live as you do, and to bring your gift of poetry to the world is part of the psyche. I simply adore this poem in every way imaginable. 10 Karin Anderson

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Fay, you wrote it.. beautiful.. your word usage amazes me.

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Susan Jarvis 04 May 2009

The title's enticed me, the words have excited me - this is a wonderful tribute to those scented swathes of sapphire. S :)

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Fiona Davidson 04 May 2009

This is such a wonderful write Fay...bluebells were one of my mothers favourite flowers and always bring her memory back to me...don't you just love this time of year? ....Fi 10++++

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Muhammad Ali 04 May 2009

Nice Lovely poem Brother, nice to read! 10.. Ali

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 May 2009

Always thought you do nature very well Fay.. Andy 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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