Blue Whale Birthday Comments
It supposed to be
A fantastic time
The most memorable
Birthday of mine
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Very strong words. Good construction.Lots of mix and matches.Good reading.Thanks.Please also read my poems.
Told as advice from Mother Whale to offspring - this is a very good innovative theme Shirin - -and written with flair and pathos... it has my 10 from Fay
you are not selfish at all... you don't have your world revolving around you.. I love he insight in the poem.. you are a great poet.
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7/24/2025 7:13:55 PM # 1.0.0
a motherly advice so beautifully woven into words................colour of red indeed is something we pray our kids never have to suffer ever.............well written..............