Sunday, April 30, 2006

Blue Water On Cloudless Days Comments

Rating: 5.0

A little boy found a blue rock
in the street.
He showed it to his mother
who believed it to be very valuable,
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Sonny Rainshine
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Lola Cunningham 18 March 2007

Sonny, a ten for this fine piece you have written here. The ending, neatly ties together, all the elements.

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Danny Reynolds 30 April 2006

Very good, Sonny. The end brings closure to both his emotions. Danny

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