Monday, January 21, 2008

Blue Valentine From The Other End Comments

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I’ll cross the Mississippi
my legs are far so pretty
rhythm the steps
any longer the drowning dawn
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Stefania Paluzzi
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Afzal Shauq 22 September 2009

and time, my a-roving boy (ehi my babe there, liar of gold) is but a floor floating on tip-tap puzzle chords for enchained blue-electric rains hmm well done..its really a greta and rich poem with meaningful idea and the expression is very much poetic and sweet..liked it very much..appreciate your work..

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