Sunday, March 15, 2009

Blue Thoughts Comments

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Blue roses
around the gold Moon, I see,
in the starry sky, of this magical night.
They will be, perhaps, my desires that
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Clementina Gallitelli
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Afzal Shauq 13 August 2009

Blue roses around the gold Moon, I see, in the starry sky, of this magical night. They will be, perhaps, my desires that push me to the Dream; while, my body, with its reasons, withholds to me on the Earth. But, it is in this moment, than like a dropp in the water, I am myself. hmm a short poem but much inside hidden..the rich idea with sweet way expressions, .. logic is clear and seem the idea meaningful enough..really liked it very much and hope you add moe poems too..you are doing a good and impressive job..10/10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 August 2009

withholds to me on the Earth. But, it is in this moment, than like a dropp in the water, I am myself. u r one particles that builds entire structure and beproud of what u are. beautiful write....10 rad mine... dreams never come true..miss i miss u... mary to marry and dreamland

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