The day is warm with a sweet sun
Yet, all I feel is his rejection
The sky is nice and the clouds are pretty pink
Yet, jealousy is the only feeling that sinks
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i am her to confess; what you wrote here speaks straight to my inner man i ignored God and his love ever since 2001 i shunned away from preachings and going to church but this takes me back to what i am running away from. above all nice piece of writing.
wow! i have read a couple of good poems, but this is great! very well written. Definitely going to my fav poem list. I just love it!
I really like how you combined the story of God and the rainbow with the essence of lost love......great job: p
a realistic approach in poetic way..well done 10/10