Deep shadow forcing rippled surface wake;
defying gravity great blow ships sail,
leaping open water turn sideways break,
splash monolithic lunging blue sea whales.
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Hmm! The monolithic sea whales with mammoth strength and unnerving length splashing in the deep blue! ! Those behemoths are awesome and dreadful at the same time! Your first hand experience of having seen them (encountered? ?) gives ur description such force and vividness!
Whales are wonderful creatures, especially the Dolphin - love to swim with one, butI don't swim! ! Great write.
must be a fantastic sight to witness on the open sea, great write showing their majesty
Well written captain cur