Sunday, November 22, 2009

Blue Rose For You Comments

Rating: 4.8

the sun sank beneath the horizon,
leaving the sky bathed in shades of marmalade,
fading into pink, grey
and...infinite midnightblue
...
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Charlene Gray
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Charlene Gray 16 December 2009

appreciate your reads, Arkay Dass and Sonya Florentino.thanks =)

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R.k Das 16 December 2009

wow, , what at atmosphere created, , what colors sprinkled, , , what emotion poeticised, , , you have played the colors varied and given a unique hue to teh poem, very matured composition, , thanx

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Sonya Florentino 22 November 2009

wow, i love the way this sounds spoken out loud...i love the phrasing....love how the last lines of each verse falls....

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