Saturday, October 12, 2019

Blue Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Atmosphere is clear,
The Sky, an intense blue
One can't deny,
I think of you
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Sandra Feldman
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Amir Marandi 19 October 2019

" Time's choking hand never returning what is past and gone" . " Empty days and darker nights silently transmitting deep blue pain" . Poignant poem. Sad but true. Great depiction of sadness and hopelessness. As I believe, life is cruel and time is no better than that.

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Cynthia Deon 18 October 2019

What a deep felt and sincere write. Very beautifully captured.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 October 2019

Heartaches will never last, dear Ma’am Sandra.......10+++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 October 2019

A vivid depiction of loneliness. Poignant yet so beautiful poem. Each and every marvelous line touches the heart. I hope and pray, one day, you will find happiness in those deep blue and happy skies. Beautifully written.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2019

Sky looks very blue and the atmosphere is clear. Smile of love is noticed in sky. One should remain happy and he should not cry. This poem is wonderfully penned.10

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