Saturday, September 22, 2007

Blue On Blue Moments Comments

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...My thoughts are: ' Blue On Blue'
They gravitate in my minds eye this day-
...With remembrances of all the heartache...
And the day, we went our seperate ways!
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 23 September 2007

Ah, yes, Marci, was yours the 31st? My memory is about this-long these days. Yes, there is always that lingering little thought of that one great love, perhaps, the first, that will forever be engraved in our heart of hearts forever. I was singing it, so i wrote it, and well, nostalgia, gets to me some times! Lov, Theo xxoo: 0)

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x... x... 22 September 2007

Now Theodora, this is a song and should be sung out loud and clear...How many of us, the greater majority, I venture to say, can relate to this....Love, the one that got away or worse yet, the one We ran from....makes me think of August 31st. again..~~~love, marci.xo

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 22 September 2007

It's hard when you love some one truly madly deeply, you never forget and the pain never fades away, i don't think until your dieing day, believe me i know Theo... Take heart in your poetry for it is a beautiful gift from god...10

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Jessel Jane Tevar 22 September 2007

very sad...i like the emotions pictured out in this poem-real pain....i know the feeling...

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