Wednesday, December 31, 2014

Blue Ocean Comments

Rating: 4.5

Life is so uncertain,
uncertain as we can see
The one wid us not stays always we foresee
We tend to pretend what we feel
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Preitty Nayarr
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Nishi Kumari 31 December 2014

nice poem....it depicts a true scenario of today's life...

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Chinedu Dike 31 December 2014

A well articulated train of thoughts nicely encapsulated into a lovely poem. I like the diction as it captured the poet's conviction. Indeed love and ocean shall eternally remain blue. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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