Friday, June 16, 2006

Blue Moon Comments

Rating: 4.3

Blossoming from the rock
A soul of a desperate lock
Becomes one with the blue moon
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Dustin Bennefield
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Dawn Fuzan 13 May 2014

Dustin This is a good poem, keep it up

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RyuOh Kenshin 30 June 2007

They way you wrote it is so interesting and it had a unique flow to it and I love how you gave the moon interersting characteristics. Two thumps up. - Ryu-Ohki

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Leigh A. Hill 16 June 2006

hey, this is a neat poem. its one that only a few, maybe only you can understand. i can almost grasp the concept behind it! its a neat poem! dont listen to the guy below me who commented. he doesnt know what hes talking about. love always, starr

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