Blue Lady Comments

How to start and what to say this poem is simply superb. It contains lot of lines which I treasure as I can't measure the worthiness of the poem. 'Obsteperous hunger thrusted me, To sell its worth to an unknown man For ornate his thoughts.' Directly speaking about a lover but certainly it has much more. A hidden element, a mystic nature of the poem made me to remember poems of William Blake. Great Going. I am simply carried away by the Plethora of feelings by the time I finished reading the poem. A sudden rush of feeling gushed from heart. I thank my fellow poet with my humble regards. I marvel at the poem and so is about the creator of the poem. If got to grade A****** is the rating...

A pearl of a poem love the core of our being youth at its best, Moulded my thoughts into words, And presented me a lot of pearls. nice to read...regards

A pearl of a poem with lasting memories of youth, love is always the core of our being, nice to read...regards

Fantastic, no one forgets their first love. If you have yet to find your 'quill' then I hope you find the best one for you!

But I'll never forget her, As she was my sweet quill, (I like the two lines. This is good writting keep it up!)

Wonderful! Still seeking for your pearl? An oyster will open up to reveal its beauty inside, when it is ready...not forced. Go well

Your poems has very great meaning and keep it up for your nice work

I love your writes Vippins! keep up the good work man!

it seems we all end up collecting pearls from lost love! ! The poor pearl collectors! liked it

it seam that u have touched the love.and your loving dreams r highli dreaming 4 your lover............ keep growing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

i love ur writings! ! ur word r amazing :) keep it up

pearl-nice expresion-coool poem

It sounds like your lover hurt you, I'm sorry for that. I'm sure another will offer you as much as you offer her. Lovely poetry, I love this one.

this is a very cute poem! I enjoyed it very much! :)

An intriguing poem. Open to much interpretation, I could quite easily understand your line of thought. Very poetic

Impressed by this work, Vipins, some gem not have same story.. the shine through sapphire come to tell you, there's something you cant change it's shine inside...be real of what you see sometimes not beautiful as you for the real side...Some gems need something to make it shine, Most of that gems need no heart to shine..that's why a gem easy to sell to anyone, like our world now, it's about how much price it can redeem have rather than how valuable people heart them..._Unwritten Soul

cultivation of pearl was translated into such good poem and it was flowing smoothly with the idea of human need sometimes could suppress love and care.... love just a way to create a sweet sadness in human feeling. Excellent poem! ! ! !