Sunday, July 24, 2016

Blue Is My Colour Comments

Rating: 3.5

Looking into sunlight,
My blue eyes
Now shut tight,
Allow this sapphire gem
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Tom Billsborough
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Pamela Sinicrope 28 July 2016

Blue is my color too. I appreciate your ability to write about the color, and its affect on the speaker. I love the line, My mind's lagoon Turns turquoise as it fades. I squeeze my eyes to hold It fervently as though It were a thought of just Analogy to make A song succeed. Well done Tom!

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Tom Billsborough 28 July 2016

not tried it for a few days. Very wet here! The blue is very intense. A fleeting idea can disappear very quickly. You should see me rushing around for a pen! Tom

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