Monday, June 4, 2007

Blue In Your Eyes Comments

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I look in your eyes
They're faded now
and to my surprise
The sun won't rise
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Moth Harris
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Dawn Fuzan 14 May 2014

Moth I enjoyed reading yo poem, keep writing

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Raul Castelan 09 June 2007

I love the way you rhymed in this one. You did quite well, excellent job. I shall keep on reading more.

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