Saturday, February 17, 2024

...Blue Gray... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Watch the petals
fall, caught in the
wind and all.
Drifting away, maybe
...
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Rebecca Navarre
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 22 February 2024

Excellent write. To my favourites

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 February 2024

Revisiting this beautiful poem. Always a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing, my friend.

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M. Asim Nehal 19 February 2024

I see a profound philosophy in your short and concise poem. This says a lot about life and its cycles. The petals are people who are born and disappear while the sky remains there and observes everything that happens before it. Awesome Poem..Full*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 February 2024

Tender and beautiful poetic expressions that touch the heart.Very inspiring! Top Marks and to my favorites!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 February 2024

What a very lovely poem. I can vividly see the petals caught in the wind. Superb imagery!

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