Watch the petals
fall, caught in the
wind and all.
Drifting away, maybe
in search of a brighter
day, who's to say?
When flowers are
blue and skies are
gray.
Revisiting this beautiful poem. Always a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing, my friend.
I see a profound philosophy in your short and concise poem. This says a lot about life and its cycles. The petals are people who are born and disappear while the sky remains there and observes everything that happens before it. Awesome Poem..Full*****
Tender and beautiful poetic expressions that touch the heart.Very inspiring! Top Marks and to my favorites!
What a very lovely poem. I can vividly see the petals caught in the wind. Superb imagery!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent write. To my favourites