Monday, June 26, 2006

Blue Funk Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lie awake in the deep blues and soft creams
A long day, tucked in tight
Aching muscles, tight scalp, weary eyes
Requiem for consciousness undisturbed
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Tara Teeling
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Richard Wlodarski 29 January 2017

Tara, I love the vivid imagery in your poetry. And how well you express some feelings that some people wouldn't have the courage to do so in an open forum. Thank you for sharing.

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Kurt Rees 20 February 2007

sad but full of soul... i love it... not easy to write i'm sure..

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Roger Bowman 09 February 2007

Cool sad poemo Roger

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Nimal Dunuhinga 05 July 2006

A sad longing.............an abstract painting of a blue hidden pleasure and it's vast than the blue serene sky?

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Esther Leclerc 26 June 2006

Spent from all my efforts To be heard, seen and felt Understood I am worth this, but am for now Worn out like the floors These lines among others make this a poem worth reading. Thank you, Tara.

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