Wednesday, February 9, 2011

Blue Flower - Cool Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

A blue and secret flower
is somehow attractive and cool.
It is charming that
I become a fool.
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Tang Trevor
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Stephen Austin 22 February 2011

This poem shows a successful balance between effective use of short and meaningful phrases describing something, while at the same time showing the humorous irony that aesthetic appreciation accompanies it the flower also tells the poet that love is foolish. It reminds us of the truth that no amount of money can change reality. A good effort.

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Peter Strugnell 13 February 2011

this is my favourite, very poetic

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Leas Celyn 10 February 2011

what a sweet, short poem. i do love this.

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