Thursday, May 29, 2008

Blue Eyes & Yellow Fields Comments

Rating: 3.1

The moon was a full white
The stars were shimmering bright
The summer wind blew lite
Those blue eyes faincied my site
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Pirate Love Magic Man
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Stacey Watts 07 September 2008

This was a very beautifully written poem. I love the imagery. Good job.

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, aryaindia 19 July 2008

You have a good hand at rhyming scheme and this must be your foremost advantages for writing poems. Good luck and god bless., arya

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Egi David Perdana 08 July 2008

amazing...please tell me the truth about this poem

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DELETED NOW 05 July 2008

that's sooo sweet! it's so dreamy also...

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