Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Blue Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your big blue eyes.
Look at me,
I glance right down,
Cause I'm scared you'll see,
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Resa Lynn
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george george 03 December 2009

Exquisite portrayal of caring and trust. You have done a wonderful job with this one Resa!

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Beautifully written. I love all the emotion and love put into that poem. The stanzas are perfect length and flow easily.

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