What lurks behind those eyes of blue?
What mysteries do they hold?
Those smokey, dreamy bedroom eyes
So sensual and bold;
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Magnificent work with brilliant metaphor. Love this sweet poem with 10.
Beneath the depths of seablue mist, What wonders would I find? ...............splendid
If eyes be windows to the soul, As often poets write, No doubt your soul is beautiful - Blue eyes reflect its light. a fitting finale to a lovely poem -10 anjali
'Just like a cat they stare at me, I wonder what they're thinking - Clear and bright, reflecting light, They process without blinking; ' very true indeed...cats eye most times show feelings of love..cause they r tamed with love...tame your loved ones even with burning eyes..then a doberman or even a rotviolet may not bite yoo..10+++
I loved these lines. If eyes be windows to the soul, As often poets write, No doubt your soul is beautiful - Blue eyes reflect its light. CP
another beautiful write my friend.. are these your eyes' color? wow they are beautiful too!
eyes are the windows to ones soul..they say you took that and did a superb piece relly enjoyed it...gret cheers
A beautifully proportioned, sensuously delivered, superbly crafted poem that reads without a hitch. It is indeed a joy to read one of your poems again Linda. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Eye's speak with volume that no voice can effectively hold a candle to..The spoken word can so easily be expressed to manipilate & deceive....but one will have their hands full, if they are attempting to lie /decive, whwn eye to eye with a person who understands how to read the inability of the human eye to masque contempt & deception.Excellent work, my dear...Midnight, you do R O C K! ~ ~ ~ 2009
the poem talks lovingly of a pair of loving talking eyes...well composed piece, Linda...pleasing to read...10
if i read correctly what thoughts would come to me.... what a briliant write... keep it up tks with regard for sharing