Wednesday, September 10, 2014
Blue Castle Comments
Rating: ★5.0
A lazy breeze seek its way
Above the city saw green lines
That caught the eyes in solitude
Far ahead a lovely castle
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Akhtar Jawad
10 September 2014
A symbolic poem, description of a beautiful place, beauty affected by military actions of rival forces.
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak
10 September 2014
There is always beauty phenomenal in blue castle............so nicely crafted
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8/6/2025 11:48:34 AM # 1.0.0
A wonderful poem. Loved the lines...... Smile and faded at a glance Some wicked may closed that fort Spread the blues in that citadel There saw a military move that side A beautiful castle but lost its charm into tears when military forces reached the castle. Loved reading it.