Wednesday, April 8, 2015

Blue Bus Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’ve got a hole in my shoe,
as I make my way to you;
I’ve got socks that don’t match,
but at least there ain’t no catch;
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Brian Stafford
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 April 2015

Wonderful going to jump of the bus. Nice rhyming makes this very amazing and pleasing.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 April 2015

Wow super cool poem with lovely rhyming. Unlike what u said in poem yor words rhyme so fine and flow good too. This will appeal to whoever u wrote it for surely too. Thumbs up. Nice to read u again.

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Brian Stafford

Brian Stafford

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