Monday, January 26, 2009

Blue-Bird Comments

Rating: 4.3


Three days cried a rain.
Three days wandered winds...
Three days caressed the sun...
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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Alison Cassidy 07 February 2009

The blue-bird is indeed the perfect metaphor for the return of spring. A highly original and imaginative expression of winter's never-ending journey. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Fay Slimm 07 February 2009

Spring will surely never desert you Tsira - - a lovely read thank you Fay...xx

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C.R. Clark 07 February 2009

An enchanting write, Tsira. Sometime Spring seems a long time coming, but never fear, the bluebird will return. As with all you poems, this was a pleasure to read, my friend. Thanks Richard

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Reshma Ramesh 06 February 2009

sweet little poem............well penned

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Sandra Fowler 05 February 2009

Spring is bound to come on the wings of that blue bird..A blue bird is a symbol of happiness in my part of the world. Your poems are always enchanting. And praiseworthy. Thank you for being a friend to my poems as well. Love, Sandra

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Andrew Blakemore 28 January 2009

A nice repetition, great poem and very well written. Best wishes, Andrew

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Kris Smith 26 January 2009

But spring is in your heart and words Tsira thank you Chris 10 +++

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Tom Balch 26 January 2009

Spring will come, a really nice poem Tsira,10 Tom

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