Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Blue Bird Comments

Rating: 5.0

I looked out my window and saw a blue bird,
Rememebered that even his happiness was absurd.

I lost my best friend yesterday,
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Ashley Fortin
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Ted M 05 August 2009

The last few lines are quite inspirational. Excellent poem.............10+++

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Marieta Maglas 05 August 2009

nice narrative poem, well written..............

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