Thursday, September 17, 2015

Blue Bell Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sound getting louder and louder
ears can't bear them now
thought it is from outside
may be a bell ringing somewhere else.
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M. Asim Nehal
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S H 14 June 2023

Yes our soul guides us, we all have default bell indise.

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Michael Jack 09 January 2021

Awesome poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 January 2019

True smartly comprehended is this poem about The Blue Bell that resides in your nerves and everywhere, you must find out first where this sounds come from, then you can stop this terrifying sound.That's why I love poetry, it gives me a wider range to ponder. A sublimest Dramatic Monologue and Introspection, Asim. I have enjoyed very much. A 10 and much much more. A magnificent poem for sure.

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T Rajan Evol 17 October 2015

But what did I do wrong let me just figure it out to stop this blue bell’s sound .To quote from your own poem.

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Seema Sharma 24 September 2015

awesome lines, really liked it, that inner call.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 September 2015

Wonderful imagery. Favourite lines are....Oh, it’s the blue bell bell I have in my heart I prayed for it to ring when I am not doing right......Nice piece. TFS. .....10

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David Wood 17 September 2015

We all have a bell inside us. Mine is called tinnitus. Lovely muse.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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