Monday, August 19, 2013

Blue As The Summer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hazy whiffs of sun drops cross the trees
Casting spells with fostered candlelight
Beneath a dew of green, submersed and submarine
I held a girl whose lips were red as sight
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Kevin Patrick
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Heather Wilkins 29 September 2013

very touching and deeply moving poem. enjoyed the read

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 August 2013

Fair, green emollient is the dowry of my sentence A rustic glade where time is never too soon words that deeply touch!

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