Saturday, March 27, 2010

Blue Arab Comments

Rating: 3.1

The small blue Arab stallion dances on the hill
like a glancing breaker, like a storm rearing in the sky,
In his prick-ears,the wind, that wanderer and spy,
sings of the dunes of Arabia, lion-coloured still.
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Judith Wright
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 January 2020

his stalwart mares for a phantom galloping unshod; changing for a heat-mirage his tall and velvet hill. very fine poem.

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Ann McKenzie 03 February 2018

Using a US voice spoils the scansion of these verses due to vowel length

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Judith Wright

Judith Wright

New South Wales / Australia
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