Friday, February 13, 2009

Blue. Comments

Rating: 3.4

blue is the sky,
blue is the color of my eye,
blue is the ocean,
blue is a potion,
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JOSE MURGUIA
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Ro'ya Abdulaal 19 September 2009

'Blue' is my favorite color too; lovely, sweet and simple, I loved it

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lisa moore 11 August 2009

this is great... blue is my eye colour to... i love the colour it is so many emotions put into one colour.. brilliant! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! luv lisa xo : -)

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Moez Ben Meftah 15 April 2009

Nice to have blue eyes and nice to love anything blue, even emotions. I also like this color. But when it come to poetry u have to create something that goes beyond the color itself because we all know the blue things around us. the idea is how to another color and another sense from the blue things. how does the blue reflect the black, the red the yellow. the sea is blue, u know, but that color reflects other senses in it..the danger, the unknown, the mystery, the fear.... not bad Jose, go ahead

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Shoshana Green 02 March 2009

This one is nice. Thank you. Shoshi

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Kelli Richards 13 February 2009

i like it. its too the point.

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Kranthi Pothineni 13 February 2009

Nice and short...good one

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