The sky is blue,
My eyes are oh blue,
I feel so oh blue,
I'm lying in a pool of oh so blue paint,
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Hey Anne - read this a couple of times and agree that it is intriguing and certainly has something that really captures the reader - excellent
intriguing? now this one is intriguing... good.. keep it up! !
great first poem.you deserve all kinds of encouragement. thanks.
Inside and out a touch of blue, very intriguing, love duncan X