Monday, November 17, 2014

Blue Comments

Rating: 4.8

Blue manifests polarization
where deep blue ocean meets
deep blue sky, emitting
wave to touch the shore
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ramesh rai
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Heather Wilkins 17 November 2014

blue is more pacific where all creation can survive blue is the nature permeats the entire life nice

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Sandra Feldman 17 November 2014

Love the first stanza where the sky and the sea meet creating the wave the will touch and kiss the shore. The image is perfectly beautiful. The whole poem, exquisite. Only poets think in blue......

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2014

Peak of life is blue which burns everything...interestingly presented such a beautiful poem. Nice job done really. It gives mind blowing ideas. Because each wave carries blue faith.

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