Friday, March 21, 2014

Blue Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last night was bright
There were lights, drinks and pals
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Chinedu Dike 17 March 2018

Deep feelings of weariness vividly expressed in well conceived piece of poetry. Very heartfelt, Gabriel. Thanks for sharing.

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Charles Monroe 13 April 2014

It is brilliantly honest. Blue is a good color to wear some times And then to leave it behind these lines They will help us to recall Some do not have phones at all For 'rude messages' to store; while some need some, some want more. After tears and things depressing, Lets give thanks for every blessing. P.X

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Gabriel Jirgba 17 March 2018

Thanks sir

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Hazel Durham 28 March 2014

A lovely write, with a desire now to be with people you can trust and respect so wonderfully expressed. Sorry for my delay in reading your poem.

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Leah Ayliffe 22 March 2014

Good read. I enjoyed it.

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R.benjamin Abate 21 March 2014

Nice write. People can be harsh. Life goes on. Not everyone is like that.

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Dave Walker 21 March 2014

A great poem, it's the false people you have to get over.

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