Thursday, July 21, 2005

Blubber Visits The Dance Hall Comments

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At first I thought she waltzed,
but then I saw the error of
my observation powers.
She waddled, all that blubber,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Linda Preston 23 July 2005

Herbert, This is brilliant! And it does bring to mind a certain person of our mutual acquaintance. Perhaps, long red fingernails (false of course) would have completed the picture.Keep writing.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 22 July 2005

waltz haiku ---- she waltzes her skirt dances round his loins

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