Monday, November 14, 2005

Blown Into Fantasy Comments

Rating: 5.0

the wind blew
stripping all in its wake
leaves, clouds, souls...
even the moon seemed to sway gently in the sky.
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Alfredo Jacques 31 January 2007

this is a great poem I love the way you write. take care

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Anne P 14 November 2005

I love the way you linked contrasting images of heat and cold. Awesome! take care

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